Laura asks…Do you think this is a good start to a story?my friend wrote this, i think its amazing.
could i get your opinion on the writing?
by the way, my friend is only 14 (8th grader)
I feel trapped. A corpse in a flying coffin. The girl with the long chocolate curls leans in and whispers, “This is it.” Is it really? I think to myself. I need to get out of this contraption. So many things have gone wrong from the second I stepped a foot into the idea of running away. I can see the
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