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Ken asks…I'm writer on fictionpress and I was wondering if any other fictionpress users would mind reviewing my story?Please review

"My Angel" http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2580691/1/My_Angel

or

"Charming" http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2592443/1/Charming

Honest criticisms are appreciated!
Thanks!
Could you put the review on fictionpress, please and thank you.Launch Review answers:A few typos from the first story. Hopefully you can find them because I'm too lazy to point them out, but I

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